Second draft (was Re: we need a release announcement -- soon [source material])
> developers and end-users; accordingly, we believe Debian 2.2 is an
> extremely well-tested Linux distribution ever.
This is bad english - either loose the ever, or change to something
like "the most well-tested Linux distribution ever" , or "one of the ..."
> + GNOME 1.0.56 (You can get GNOME 1.2 packages for Debian 2.2
> from Helix Code) - A free desktop environment.
I think this should Helix Code
> + Emacs 20.7, XEmacs 21.1.8 - The world's largest text editor.
Couldn't we think of something more complementary to say about emacs?
"comprehensive" "advanced" "One True" :)
> the Debian Social Contract, and its commitment to provide the best
again, I think the citation should come afterwards.
> operating system possible. We think Debian 2.2 is another important
> step in that direction.
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