Re: RfC: Updated Debian Flyer
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On Friday 11 June 2004 11:18, Michael Banck wrote:
> I've updated the Debian flyer for this year's LinuxTag. As we are
> going to hand out Sarge-DVDs anyway and in order to make it a bit more
> current and future-proof, I've based the content on Sarge now. We have
> to submit the .pdf for printing today, so I'd appreciate any comments
> pertaining the content (or spelling).
I just found one error in the first point of the section "Included with
Debian GNU/Linux" (\def\Windowsystem): The word "applications" should be
separated in "ap-plica-tions", not "applic-ations".
One small suggestion: In the list of supported programming languages, you
could mention Ruby, which is pretty popular in Japan and seems to get more
and more popular here as well. The space on the flyer would be sufficient,
Other than that, I didn't discover any errors, but I'm not a native speaker.
Does the German version get printed, too? In that case, there are some
issues with it as well. It's not updated, for one. Would you need help with
Bigamy is having one spouse too many. Monogamy is the same.
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