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Re: Latest `disputes' draft (#3)

On Mon, Oct 28, 2002 at 06:29:18PM +0100, Jochen Voss wrote:
> Hi,
> On Fri, Oct 25, 2002 at 11:16:31PM +0100, Ian Jackson wrote:
> > If you can, refer the other Developer to some documentation saying
> > when they should and should not do something, do so.
> Is this a correct english sentence now?  I guess the ", do so"
> should be removed.

Either the first comma or the ", do so" should be removed. The latter
is stronger. But the sentence as a whole is rather weak.

Duncan Findlay

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