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Bug#944325: please fix this unclear and obtuse phrasing in §7.8 (suggestion provided)



On Sun, 17 Nov 2019 17:01:21 -0700, Sean Whitton wrote:

> On Sun 17 Nov 2019 at 10:29AM -08, Russ Allbery wrote:
> > How about:
> >
> >     This field should only be used when there are license or DFSG
> >     requirements to retain the referenced source package.  It should not
> >     be added solely as a way to locate packages that need to be rebuilt
> >     against newer versions of their build dependencies.
> 
> Thanks, I think this is good -- would be good to hear from Nicholas too
> though.

(Not Nicholas but) As a non-native speaker I think that's clear and
easy to read.

Cheers,
gregor

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