Bug#648387: [copyright-format] English proofreading.
Hi Charles et al,
Charles Plessy wrote:
> thanks a lot Justin for the proofreading.
Thanks for making it happen!
> I read it in details and agree with
> all the changes you propose. I therefore propose to the debian-policy team to
> apply your patch.
I agree --- after a careful look, I didn't find anything
objectionable, or even anything that seemed to change the meaning.
(Well, the "if they have a problem with the Affero GPL" line, both
before and after the change, does sound a little strange. It would
probably be easier to understand without background if we dropped the
particular example of a license.)
> To consolidate related changes, let's wait however a little
> for additional propositions. For instance, I would like to suggest to replace
> “dash” by “hyphen”
I disagree here. Please file separate reports for separate proposals,
unless the text they affect and subject matter seem to overlap a lot
and the proposed text is already ready.
DEP drivers: do these changes look reasonable to you? Policy
delegates: does this require formal seconds, or is it just an