On Sun 2013-02-03 07:01:09 -0500, Xavier wrote:
> libnet-server-mail-perl description needs to be reviewed by a native
> (see d/ch). Can someone do it ?
I'm a native English speaker (en_US). The description is already
actually quite well-written. i know lots of native english speakers who
would have been satisfied with doing a much worse job themselves.
I have three minor changes for you to consider if you want them, but i
don't consider any of them necessary:
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 84a35fa..f30c425 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ Package: libnet-server-mail-perl
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends},
${perl:Depends}
-Description: class to easily create a mail server
+Description: versatile and extensible mail server framework
Net::Server::Mail is a versatile and extensible implementation of the SMTP
- protocol and its different evolutions like ESMTP and LMTP. The event driven
- object-oriented API makes it easy to incorporate the SMTP protocol into your
+ protocol and closely-related protocols like ESMTP and LMTP. The event driven
+ object-oriented API makes it easy to incorporate the SMTP protocol into perl
programs.
.
It provides a mechanism to easily add future or not yet implemented ESMTP
Thanks for your work on this package, Xavier!
Regards,
--dkg
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