Re: Description review for libnet-server-mail-perl

[Xavier <x.guimard@free.fr>]

On Sun 2013-02-03 15:51 +0100, Daniel Kahn Gillmor wrote:
> 
>> libnet-server-mail-perl description needs to be reviewed by a native
>> (see d/ch). Can someone do it ?
> 
> I'm a native English speaker (en_US).  The description is already
> actually quite well-written.  i know lots of native english speakers who
> would have been satisfied with doing a much worse job themselves.
> 
> I have three minor changes for you to consider if you want them, but i
> don't consider any of them necessary:
> 
> diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
> index 84a35fa..f30c425 100644
> --- a/debian/control
> +++ b/debian/control
> @@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ Package: libnet-server-mail-perl
>  Architecture: all
>  Depends: ${misc:Depends},
>           ${perl:Depends}
> -Description: class to easily create a mail server
> +Description: versatile and extensible mail server framework
>   Net::Server::Mail is a versatile and extensible implementation of the SMTP
> - protocol and its different evolutions like ESMTP and LMTP. The event driven
> - object-oriented API makes it easy to incorporate the SMTP protocol into your
> + protocol and closely-related protocols like ESMTP and LMTP. The event driven
> + object-oriented API makes it easy to incorporate the SMTP protocol into perl
>   programs.
>   .
>   It provides a mechanism to easily add future or not yet implemented ESMTP
> 
> 
> Thanks for your work on this package, Xavier!
> 
> Regards,

Thanks Daniel, I've uploaded your changes on git.

Cheers,
Xavier