Damyan Ivanov wrote: > Hi, Julian, > > I am just another lurker in pkg-debian list with otherwise insufficient > free time to actually help. Anyway, I read your SVN guide and I have a > couple of comments. Most of these are just nitpicking, but anyway... > Please ignore any of them if you think they're irrelevant. Thanks for the feedback. Just for the record: except for a few paragraphs, I did NOT write the Subversion guide. > - The document title is "NAME" - this is what my browser shows in its > caption and this is what is visible on > http://pkg-perl.alioth.debian.org/ next to subversion.html > May be change it to something like "Debian Perl Group Subversion Guide"? > > - "This is a work in progress, please send comments..." is duplicated in > INTRO and "The Tools" > > - "svn-inject" starts with "Like we said, svn-inject is used to > insert...". I can't find any mention of svn-inject before this paragraph > making me wonder if my eyes still can read :) > > - End of section 4.2: "If you sign the key, ..." No keys are signed, > files are :-) - .changes, .dsc > > That's it. as you see, only minor things. All good catches. I did a little reformatting to fix the title issue, removed the redundant "INDEX" section (it's generated automatically by pod2html), and fixed the other things. Again, thanks for the feedback. > Overall, the document is very good. Thanks for taking the time to write > it. Yes, thank you, Allard and Joachim! Julian.
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