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Suggested minor changes to the P&P templates



Hello,

I've cleaned up some phrases in the P&P templates, added some "please"
here and there, a new question; maybe these cleanups can be handy for
others as well.  We also lack documentation on debian-vote and
debian-project in the list of mailing lists at the bottom.

--- nm_pp.txt	2004-09-17 13:07:41.000000000 +0200
+++ nm_pp.txt.enrico	2004-09-15 19:05:37.000000000 +0200
@@ -33,21 +33,25 @@
     http://www.washington.edu/pine/overview/legal.html)
 
  5. At http://people.debian.org/~joerg/bad.licenses.tar.bz2 you can
-    find a tarball of 4 bad licenses. Compare these licenses with the
-    first nine points of the DFSG and show what changes they need to
+    find a tarball of 4 bad licenses. Please compare these licenses with the
+    first nine points of the DFSG and show what changes would be needed to
     make them DFSG-free. No need to compare word for word, for some
-    licenses this is an impossible task, but you should spot the
+    licenses this is an impossible task: just limit yourself in spotting the
     biggest mistakes.
 
 5a. The GNU Free Documentaion License (FDL) has been heavily discussed
-    on debian-legal recently. Read
+    on debian-legal recently. Please read
     http://people.debian.org/~srivasta/Position_Statement.html and
-    briefly explain how you feel about the including documents
-    licensed under the FDL in main and what consequences of this
-    position might be for Debian.
+    briefly explain how you feel about including documents
+    licensed under the FDL in main and what might be the consequences of this
+    position for Debian.
 
  6. Are there any sections of the DFSG or Social Contract that you
-    might like to see changed? If so, why?
+    might like to see changed? If so, which ones, and why?
+
+ 7. What is your current agenda with regards to Debian, and how does it
+    fit with the Social Contract?
+
 
 For the answer to the next two questions you need to sign the
 email. Please dont forget that or I cant accept the answer.
@@ -66,7 +70,7 @@
  7. What are Non-Maintainer Uploads (NMUs) and when would you do an NMU?
     Please list the usual procedure for a NMU.
 
- 8. Tell me 3 different methods to close a bug in the BTS, the difference
+ 8. Please tell me 3 different methods to close a bug in the BTS, the difference
     between them, and when to use which method.
 
  9. Each bugreport has a severity and optionally one or more tags. What's
@@ -87,7 +91,7 @@
 14. You've just heard about this great program and would like to package
     it, what are your next steps?
 
-15. How do you check a package before upload? Please explain to me why
+15. How do you check a package before the upload? Please explain why
     and how you perform the checks.
 
 16. What does version 3.4-2.1 mean?  What Debian control file would you
@@ -119,8 +125,8 @@
     other package. How would you keep track of the development of other
     packages, even if you are not the maintainer?
 
-24. Should you happily sign another developer's GPG key? If not
-    please, explain me the checks you will make before signing it.
+24. Should you happily sign another developer's GPG key? If not,
+    please explain me the checks you will make before signing it.
 
 25. Do you know how to create a revocation certificate for your GPG key?
     Do you have one? Why can it be meaningful to set a key expiration date?
@@ -156,23 +162,25 @@
     Quality Assurance group.
 
 A word on mailing lists: there are quite a lot of Debian mailing lists
-now and packaging-related packages, and I'd just like to check with
+now, and of packaging-related packages, and I'd just like to check with
 you whether you know about the key ones.
 
 debian-announce: Major public announcements
 debian-devel-announce: Major announcements to the developer community
 
 These two lists are must-subscribes.  Everything else is optional.  I
-abbreviate 'debian-' to '-' from now on!
+abbreviate 'debian-' to '-' from now on.
 
 -security-announce:
           security updates to stable
 -private: you'll be subscribed automatically when your new-maintainer
-          application is accepted; sensitive discussions, flamewars
-          etc.  You can unsubscribe if you wish.
+          application is accepted; sensitive discussions.  You can
+          unsubscribe if you wish.
 -devel:   general mailing list for developer issues
 -policy:  where possible changes to debian-policy are discussed
 -mentors: helping newbie Developers.
+TODO: -vote?
+TODO: -project?
 
 There are many others; check the mailing list page on the web site
 for details.
@@ -228,7 +236,7 @@
              errors. You should never upload a package which is not
              checked by one of these tools.
 
-Finally talk about some important websites:
+Finally, some important web links:
  http://www.debian.org/devel/
             The Developer's Corner.  Contains links and on-line versions
             of the stuff I mentioned before.


Ciao,

Enrico

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