Re: RFS: joystick (updated package)

[Ben Finney <ben+debian@benfinney.id.au>]

Stephen Kitt <lists@sk2.org> writes:

> joystick   - Testing and calibration tools

That synopsis should follow the Best Packaging Practices
<URL:http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/developers-reference/ch-best-pkging-practices.en.html#s-bpp-pkg-synopsis>.

The above synopsis is too vague, not telling the reader what it is
for. It also should be an appositive clause, not capitalised like the
start of a sentence.

A better synopsis might be:

    set of testing and calibration tools for joysticks

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Ben Finney