Re: Med-E-Tel 2013 Poster

[Nicolas Barbier <nicolas.barbier@gmail.com>]

2013/3/16 Eric Maeker <eric.maeker@gmail.com>:

>         http://ericmaeker.fr/FreeMedForms/medetel_2013.pdf
>
> Thanks for your review and comments.

“Actually, the DDI engine” → “Currently, the DDI engine”

<URL:http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/actually#Usage_notes>

“Some development is actually started” → “Some development is
currently underway” (or “has just been started” or so)

“during three different moments” → “at three different moments”
(because “during” indicates a period, while “moment” is instantaneous)

“to avoid competing conflicts”: What is a “competing conflict”?

Of less importance are:

“require a user validation to pass through.” → “require a user
validation to continue.” (because “to pass through” has a more
physical meaning in my mind)

“the DDI software of the project” → “the project’s DDI software” or
maybe “FreeMedForms’ prescription module”

Question: Does FreeMedForms use the same XML-based interface (as
GNUmed) to communicate with FreeDiams?

“implemented this interoperability.” → “implemented this interface.”

Great job of telling the important things in such a concise manner
(which I guess is the most important property of such a poster?).

Nicolas

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