Re: [German] Talk at LinuxTag

[Thomas Weber <thomas.weber.mail@gmail.com>]

Am Montag, 28. Mai 2007 08:03:58 schrieb Andreas Tille:
> Hi,
>
> for those who understand German language I putted a preliminary
> version of my talk at LinuxTag (on 30. June) at
>
>       http://people.debian.org/~tille/talks/200705_ltb/debian-med.pdf
>
> (source at
>       http://people.debian.org/~tille/talks/200705_ltb/debian-med.tex )
>
> While this is subject to change over the two remaining days I would
> like you to have a look at it and perhaps give some hints for
> enhancements.  The talk is in German - so if you don't understand
> this language you can save some time if you ignore this mail.

sheet 4, "Motivation", last point: you are using a Debian "Kringel" instead of 
a normal point.

sheet 9: Does your audience know what a "maintainer" is? The usual translation 
is "Paketbetreuer".

same sheet: s/Netzinstallation/Netzwerkinstallation/

sheet 10: s/Untermenge/Teilmenge/, unless you are talking to mathematicians 
(and maybe even then).

General: the list of packages and their description is highly 
specialised: does this fit with your audience (I can only guess what a 
sequence alignment is).

OTOH, the description of GNUmed is uh, non-existant.

	Thomas