awesome work, well done. how about putting that as an appendix into
live-manual itself?
Thanks.
I fear it is way too long (8 pages) to include it in the manual. Perhaps it would be better to put it in the wiki under the Documentation title at
http://live.debian.net/devel/live-manual/
And then simply adding a line in the manual saying: "There is a style guide available ..."
for the actual content of the style guide, i haven't yet read everything
yet, but i don't feel qualified to comment on it.
In respect to the content, it is of course open for improvement. The experience of authors and translators would be invaluable to make the guide better.
Best wishes.