Re: draft GFDL position statement?

[Jeremy Hankins <nowan@nowan.org>]

Walter Landry <wlandry@ucsd.edu> writes:
> Jeremy Hankins <nowan@nowan.org> wrote:

>> B. Transparent and Opaque copies
>> 
>> Under certain circumstances the document may not have a transparent
>> version (for example, after being modified with a proprietary word
>> processor).
>
> I would change this parenthetical to 
>
>   (for example, a document created with OpenOffice, LyX or a
>   proprietary word processor)
>
> That makes it more clear that it affects even open formats.

I've changed the parenthetical to:

(for example, after being modified with OpenOffice, LyX or a
proprietary word processor)

Thanks.

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Jeremy Hankins <nowan@nowan.org>
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