Re: [RFR2] wml://security/2013/dsa-2736.wml

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Subject: Re: [RFR2] wml://security/2013/dsa-2736.wml
From: jean-pierre giraud <jean-pierregiraud@neuf.fr>
Date: Mon, 12 Aug 2013 18:40:56 +0200
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Bonjour,

juste une suggestion

Amicalement

Jipege

--- dsa-2736.wml	2013-08-12 18:22:20.996186622 +0200
+++ dsa-2736jpg.wml	2013-08-12 18:27:44.803219071 +0200
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 SSH. Un attaquant distant pourrait utiliser cette vulnÃ©rabilitÃ© pour monter une
 attaque locale par dÃ©ni de service en plantant le client putty.</p>
 
-<p>De plus, cette mise Ã  jour rÃ©troporte quelques renforcements venant des
+<p>Cette mise Ã  jour rÃ©troporte, de plus, quelques renforcements venant des
 dÃ©veloppeurs amont, Ã©ventuellement utiles pour la sÃ©curitÃ©.</p></li>
 
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