Re: [RFR2] wml://users/org/{custerinstitute,greennet,switch}.wml

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Subject: Re: [RFR2] wml://users/org/{custerinstitute,greennet,switch}.wml
From: Jean-Michel OLTRA <jm.oltra.antispam@espinasse.net>
Date: Tue, 6 Jan 2009 08:17:29 +0100
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    Bonjour,


Le mardi 06 janvier 2009, Thomas Péteul a écrit...


> Toutes les remarques ont été corrigées, merci. :)

> Un petit tour pour une autre relecture.

custerinstitute.wml

ligne 10 : Debian est utilisée (au féminin ?)

greenet.wml

ligne 13 : caritatives

switch.wml

ligne 18 : domaines (plusieurs  ?)
ligne 29 : recommandera
ligne 30 : services ??

-- 
jm

A.E.L. Sarl (R.C.S CASTRES 490843240)
http://www.spidboutic.fr

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