Re: Please review and translate: announcement about Handshake donation
Laura Arjona Reina wrote:
> Please review and translate the announcement about a donation made by
> Handshake, available here:
>
> https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/announcements/blob/master/en/2019/20190329.wml
>
> (to be published on Friday 29 March 2019, around 17:00 UTC).
If I could work out how to do this via git, I would; until then,
here's a patch.
One extra comment:
> <q><em>A deep and sincere thank you to the Handshake Foundation for their
> support of the Debian Project.</em></q> said Chris Lamb, Debian Project Leader.
> <q><em>Contributions such as theirs make it possible for a large number of
> diverse contributors from all over the world to work together towards our
> mutual goal of developing a fully-free "universal" operating system.</em></q>
How would this markup system react if that was <q>universal</q>, with
nested <Q>s?
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- en_2019_20190329.wml 2019-03-28 14:35:35.938004963 +0000
+++ en_2019_20190329.wml.jbr 2019-03-28 14:49:59.744245418 +0000
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-<define-tag pagetitle>Handshake donated $300,000 USD to Debian</define-tag>
+<define-tag pagetitle>Handshake donates $300,000 USD to Debian</define-tag>
<define-tag release_date>2019-03-29</define-tag>
#use wml::debian::news
# $Id$
<p>
-The Debian project received in 2018 a donation of $300,000 USD from
+In 2018 the Debian project received a donation of $300,000 USD from
<a href="https://handshake.org/";>Handshake</a>, an organization developing an
experimental peer-to-peer root domain naming system.
</p>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
</p>
<p>
-Handshake is a decentralized, permission-less naming protocol compatible
+Handshake is a decentralized, permissionless naming protocol compatible
with DNS where every peer is validating and in charge of managing the
root zone with the goal of creating an alternative to existing
Certificate Authorities.
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
The Handshake project, its sponsors and contributors recognize Free and
Open Source Software as a crucial part of the foundations of the
Internet and their project, so they decided to reinvest back into free
-software by gifting $10,200,000 USD to different FLOSS developers and projects,
-as well as non profit organizations and universities that support free software development.
+software by gifting $10,200,000 USD to various FLOSS developers and projects,
+as well as non-profit organizations and universities that support free software development.
</p>
<p>
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