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Re: debian-faq

victory wrote:
> #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:133
> To list all packages, for which newer package versions are available, run:
> 2nd "package" is redundant

And by English punctuation rules the comma shouldn't be there either.
> #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:272
> The Debian installer will typically install automaticaly the task
> automatical*l*y

And it's in the wrong place - you can't put the adverb between verb
and object.  We could move it to the end of the sentence, but that's
weak; better to move it to before the verb.  Of course this means it
collides with the adverb that's already there, but *that* one can
dodge to sentence-initial position:

 Typically, the Debian installer will automatically install the task
 associated with  a standard system and a desktop environment.

JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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