Re: Bug#789798: [RFR] New grub-installer-template

[Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com>]

Philip Hands wrote:
>>  Template: grub-installer/no-nvram
>>  Type: boolean
>>  Default: false
>>  # :sl4:
>>  _Description: Avoid adding GRUB to Firmmware NVRAM configuration?
                                       ^^^^^
Hang on, typo (and why capitalised?)

>>   By default GRUB will be registered into NVRAM on platforms where this is
>>   required. e.g. UEFI Boot Manager or OpenFirmware boot device.
             ^
Stop followed by lowercase "e.g."?  I'd suggest expanding the Latin
abbreviation to "such as" here and "for instance" below.

Then taking your revisions:
>   Ocasionally this is not desired (e.g. on systems that PXE boot and then
     ^
Typo: "occasionally".

"PXE boot" as a verb might want a hyphen, but then again maybe not.

>   chainload).  Answering "yes" here will leave NVRAM untouched.

Or "setting this option", or maybe "accepting", though that might be
confusing with "Default: false" and "yes" meaning "avoid doing it"...
I'll leave it for now.  So:

  _Description: Avoid adding GRUB to firmware NVRAM configuration?
   By default GRUB will be registered into NVRAM on platforms where this is
   required, such as UEFI Boot Manager or OpenFirmware boot devices.
   .
   Occasionally this is not desired (for instance on systems that PXE boot
   and then chainload). Answering "yes" here will leave NVRAM untouched.

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JBR
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