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Re: [Debconf-team] [RFR] Please check the DebConf12 final report

On Thu, Feb 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM, Christian PERRIER <bubulle@debian.org> wrote:
> Quoting victory (victory.deb@gmail.com):
>> On Wed, 13 Feb 2013 23:34:13 +0000
>> Justin B Rye wrote:
>> Index: video.tex
>> -contributed to increase the quality of the recordings.
>> +contributed to increasing the quality of the recordings.
>> is this right?
>> "to increase" and "increasing" seem correct here.
> When it comesat such things, Justin is always right..:-)
> To my experience, in such situations, what is usually "natural" for me
> and my Frenglish is usually.....the wrong choice.

Also take on mind that English is not my mother thong, I really
appreciate proofreading of video team section, I think a first
revision was made from Moray, in any case the full sentence is:

Having dedicated equipment for the DebConf video team has reduced the
setup time and contributed to increase the quality of the recordings.

The only constant is the change

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