Hi, Le 05/06/2012 03:41, Justin B Rye a écrit : >> The <strong>technical</strong> part of Debian Project is already > ^ > Insert "the" here and below. > > If I was doing "stylistic" edits I'd suggest s/part/side/, but that's > getting too close to changing the content for my liking. I'm happy to take your advice here too, and thank you also for the rest of the review you already committed. >> No matter how you identify yourself or how others perceive you: >> we welcome you. > > I'd have suggested a semicolon (or even a comma) there, but a colon > would definitely be valid if the sentence started "it doesn't matter > how...", so I'll stop worrying about it. I guess amending the actual diversity statement just approved via GR is out of the picture now (and yes, the sentence started with “It doesn't matter” last month during the initial review). Regards David
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