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Bug#681981: Minor package description issues



Package: compizconfig-backend-gconf
Version: 0.8.4-1
Severity: wishlist
X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org

Dear Maintainer,

there are some minor (mainly orthographic) issues with the package
description (1):


   Description: Compiz Fusion configuration system - gconf backend
    Compiz Fusion is the result of the re-unification of the Beryl-project
    and the community around the Compiz Window Manager. It seeks to provide
    an easy and fun-to-use windowing environment, allowing use of the
    graphics hardware to provide impressive effects, amazing speed and
    unrivalled usefulness
    .
    This package provides the gconf-based configuration backend for the
    compiz-fusion plugin system.


GNOME uses another spelling for GConf (2). Perhaps you meant reunion
instead of re-unification as well. And s/seeks/aims/ would sound better
for me.

For your convenience I copied a new version into this mail.


Description: Compiz Fusion configuration system - GConf backend
 Compiz Fusion is the result of the reunion of the Beryl project
 and the community around the Compiz Window Manager. It seeks to provide
 an easy and fun-to-use windowing environment, allowing use of the
 graphics hardware to provide impressive effects, amazing speed and
 unrivalled usefulness.
 .
 This package provides the GConf configuration backend for the
 Compiz Fusion plugin system.


Kind regards,
    Martin

1: http://ddtp.debian.net/ddt.cgi?desc_id=40600
2: http://projects.gnome.org/gconf/


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