Quoting Simon Josefsson (simon@josefsson.org): > Many thanks for your review, Christian. I'm fine with all your changes. > I also learned that 'Description:' fields now apparently are prefered to > start lower-cased, which was news to me. Possibly the Description field > becomes even more clear like this though: > > OLD: > Description: two-factor password+OTP (YubiKey) PAM module > > NEW: > Description: two-factor password and YubiKey OTP (one-time password) PAM module > > although I don't recall what the exact max line length is. A bit shorter (76 chars is strongly suggested). I adopte this without the parenthesis as "one-time password" is expanded in the long description. Otherwise, I adopted all suggestions by Justin. What would be nice is to have a comment of yours about the debconf note (the second debconf template and Justin's suggestion to add a paragraph in the first one that would mention that the PAM module is disabled....and therefore making the second template useless).
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