Question on title and explanation of shuffles
Hi,
On Thu, Apr 28, 2011 at 03:31:59PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Osamu Aoki wrote:
> > Thanks. After I apply this, I will suffle
>
> Shuffle? Snuffle? Suffer?
"Shuffle", I meant. But maybe suffer for you :-)
> There are a few things I insist on doing contrary to the established
> consensus in US style manuals, though; for a start like most writers
> in the fields of either linguistics or IT (and like Wikipedia's own
> Manual of Style), I insist on "logical" placement of quotation
> marks - "like this", never "like this."
Yes. Thanks.
I have one question.
1.2. Programs you need for development
1.3. Documentation needed for development
Can these use the same style? Only 1.3 was changed by you.
I wonder if I have to change to:
1.2. Programs needed for development
But the way, here are what I did after pondering on your comments.
(URL link should work after 4 hours.)
S2.1 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#workflow
New section to give big picture first.
S2.2 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#choose
More positive guidance for what to package.
Add very simple package start point for people to practice.
S2.4 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#simplemake
Added stronger message to read the references if Autotools tool chain is used.
S2.6 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#namever
Renewed content. Together with S1.1, old terminology section is replaced.
S2.8 and S2.9
http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#non-native-dh-make
http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/first.en.html#native-dh-make
Clarified S2.8 to be just for non-native package and explicitly added S2.9.
Chapt. 6 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/build.en.html
-sa option is moved to Chapter 8 as S8.2
Instead, "-us -uc" is used as alternative case
S6.1 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/build.en.html#completebuild
Clarified for the non-native package and the native package.
S7.1 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/checkit.en.html#inadvent
Added to address typical 3.0 (quilt) format mistakes.
I was wondering to use "Suspicious changes" or "Inadvent changes".
S8.2 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/upload.en.html#option-sa
Moved from Chapter 6. and touched up.
S8.3 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/upload.en.html#skipped-uploads
Touched up.
S9.1 http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/update.en.html#newrevision
Local ~rc version for smooth transition and unclutter.
TIA,
Osamu
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