Question on ch2 change: Updated maint-guide contents, question on style
Hi,
On Wed, Apr 20, 2011 at 11:30:51AM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Onward to chapter two. I'm trying to cut down on editing glitches by
> @@ -920,25 +922,28 @@
> </section>
> <section id="portable"><title>Free portable programs</title>
> <para>
> -A lot of Free programs are written in the <ulink url="&c-program;">C</ulink> and
> +A lot of free software is written in the <ulink url="&c-program;">C</ulink> and
> <ulink url="&cxx;">C++</ulink> languages. Many of
> these use Autotools or CMake to make them portable across different platforms.
> -These tools are used to generate <filename>Makefile</filename> and other
> -required source files. Then, such programs are built with usual <literal>make;
> -make install</literal>.
> +These tools are used to generate the <filename>Makefile</filename> and other
> +required source files. Then, such programs are built using the usual
> +<literal>make; make install</literal>.
> </para>
I am wondering on this. Isn's it better to do:
A lot of free software programs are written in the ...
Then all following text using "they are ..." goes nicely with this.
Osamu
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