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Re: [DONE] wml://CD/verify.html



David Prévot wrote:
> Thanks for the hint, done too (just kept two paragraphs that may still
> be accurate):

This text is to link from a mention of verification on the /CD/faq.html
page, right?
 
> +<p>
> +Detailed information are available on the page related to
> +<a href="verify">authenticity verification</a>.
> +</p>

No, information always "is", it never "are".  And "related" is too
weak - I'd suggest:

   Detailed information is available on the
   <a href="verify">authenticity verification</a> page.

(Or with the </a> later.)
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package


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