Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the libzorpll source package.
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--- libzorpll.old/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates 2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates 2011-03-19 07:04:52.149246201 +0100
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
Template: zorplib/admin-email
Type: string
Default: NONE
-_Description: Administrator's email address:
- Various Zorp applications are able to send a notification e-mail to an
- administrator's address in case of an unexpected process termination. If you
- don't wish to receive such notifications, leave this field blank or specifiy
- NONE.
+_Description: Email address for Zorp notifications:
+ Some Zorp applications are able to send a notification email in case
+ of an unexpected process termination. Leave this empty (or specify
+ 'NONE') if you don't want to receive such notifications.
I'm not sure this is worth talking about "administrator". After all,
this is only a mail address where notifications are sent.
Standardize on "email".
Revert the second sentence: action first, followed by consequences.
--- libzorpll.old/debian/control 2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/control 2011-03-18 18:38:18.789154566 +0100
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
Section: libs
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
+Description: Zorp - low-level library functions
+ Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+ are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains low level library functions needed by Zorp and
associated programs.
Standardize short description with our usual "Common desc - Specific
desc" style.
"new generation" may sound weird in 5 years..:-). Let's be factual
These changes are propagated to other binary packages.
Template: zorplib/admin-email Type: string Default: NONE _Description: Email address for Zorp notifications: Some Zorp applications are able to send a notification email in case of an unexpected process termination. Leave this empty (or specify 'NONE') if you don't want to receive such notifications.
--- libzorpll.old/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates 2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/libzorpll3.9-0.templates 2011-03-19 07:04:52.149246201 +0100
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
Template: zorplib/admin-email
Type: string
Default: NONE
-_Description: Administrator's email address:
- Various Zorp applications are able to send a notification e-mail to an
- administrator's address in case of an unexpected process termination. If you
- don't wish to receive such notifications, leave this field blank or specifiy
- NONE.
+_Description: Email address for Zorp notifications:
+ Some Zorp applications are able to send a notification email in case
+ of an unexpected process termination. Leave this empty (or specify
+ 'NONE') if you don't want to receive such notifications.
--- libzorpll.old/debian/control 2011-03-14 20:13:02.927161205 +0100
+++ libzorpll/debian/control 2011-03-19 07:08:14.154112299 +0100
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
Section: libs
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
+Description: Zorp - low-level library functions
+ Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+ are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains low level library functions needed by Zorp and
associated programs.
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@
Section: libdevel
Architecture: any
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}, libglib2.0-dev, libcap-dev [linux-any], libssl-dev
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, development files
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
+Description: Zorp - development files
+ Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+ are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the development files necessary to create programs
based on libzorpll.
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
Architecture: any
Priority: extra
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, debug version
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
+Description: Zorp - low-level library functions (debug version)
+ Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+ are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the debugging symbols for libzorpll3.9-0.
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@
Architecture: any
Priority: extra
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Low level library functions for Zorp, debug version
- Zorp is a new generation firewall. It is essentially a transparent proxy
+Description: Zorp - low-level library functions (debug version)
+ Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
- are scriptable with the Python based configuration language.
+ are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the same library as libzorpll but with memtrace memory
debugging code enabled.
Source: libzorpll
Section: libs
Priority: optional
Maintainer: SZALAY Attila <sasa@debian.org>
Standards-Version: 3.9.1
Build-Depends: libssl-dev, libglib2.0-dev, debhelper (>= 7), libcap-dev [!kfreebsd-i386 !kfreebsd-amd64 !hurd-i386], zlib1g-dev, binutils (>= 2.14.90.0.7), po-debconf
Package: libzorpll3.9-0
Section: libs
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: Zorp - low-level library functions
Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains low level library functions needed by Zorp and
associated programs.
Package: libzorpll-dev
Section: libdevel
Architecture: any
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}, libglib2.0-dev, libcap-dev [linux-any], libssl-dev
Description: Zorp - development files
Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the development files necessary to create programs
based on libzorpll.
Package: libzorpll3.9-0-dbg
Section: debug
Architecture: any
Priority: extra
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
Description: Zorp - low-level library functions (debug version)
Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the debugging symbols for libzorpll3.9-0.
Package: libzorpll3.9-0-memtrace
Section: debug
Architecture: any
Priority: extra
Depends: libzorpll3.9-0 (= ${binary:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: Zorp - low-level library functions (debug version)
Zorp is a network firewall. It consists of a transparent proxy
firewall, with strict protocol analyzing proxies, a modular architecture,
and fine-grained control over the mediated traffic. Configuration decisions
are scriptable with the Python-based configuration language.
.
This package contains the same library as libzorpll but with memtrace memory
debugging code enabled.
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