Re: Debian Project News 2010/14 frozen. Please review and translate
Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
> I still have one more paragraph to add:
I have to admit I haven't read the whole thing yet, but where
does this one go?
> <p>Robert Millan reported in <a
> href="http://robertmh.wordpress.com/2010/10/13/about-zfs-in-squeeze/";>his
> personal blog</a> about the ZFS integration into the Debian installer for
^^^
Subtract "the" (probably)
> kfreebsd. Beside a patch for GNU Parted, all other patches needed for a ZFS
^^^^^^^^^ ^
Should kfreebsd be capitalised here, and if so, how? (Or maybe it's
kfreebsd-*.)
s/beside/besides/, but I'm not sure it's the right word. "Besides"
would imply that the GNU Parted patch *has* got in; if it hasn't
(which would fit with the need for an alternative d-i image),
the appropiate phrase is "apart from".
> root filesystem have been accepted and made it into Debian Squeeze. Thus he
> offeres a slight modified version of the Debian Installer Image <a
X ly i
> href="http://people.debian.org/~rmh/zfs/";>for downloading</a>.</p>
How about:
All the patches needed for a ZFS root filesystem have been accepted
and made it into Debian Squeeze except for one patch for GNU Parted.
He is therefore offering for download a
<a href="http://people.debian.org/~rmh/zfs/";>slightly modified
version</a> of the Debian Installer image.</p>
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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