request for feedback regarding package description

[Paul J Stevens <paul@nfg.nl>]

Hi all,

I've been asked by a prospective sponsor/mentor to have you guys take a 
look at the description of the package I'm trying to get uploaded.

I'm pasting the control file below.

Your feedback would be much appreciated.

thanks a lot!



Package: dbmail
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Pre-Depends: adduser
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ucf (>= 0.30), debconf (>= 
0.5) | debconf-2.0
Provides: imap-server, pop3-server
Suggests: dbmail-pgsql | dbmail-mysql, sqlite3
Description: mail server that supports sql based mailstorage
 DBMAIL is a collection of programs that allows both users and email to
 be stored in and retrieved from a relational database.
 .
 It supports MySQL, PostgreSQL and Sqlite3 as database backends. The
 Sqlite3 backend, LDAP authentication and Sieve filtering are included
 in the base package.
 .
 Supported client protocols are: POP3, IMAP4, LMTP, MANAGESIEVE.

Package: dbmail-pgsql
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, dbmail (= ${binary:Version})
Description: PostgreSQL module for dbmail
 This package provides a module for adding PostgreSQL database
 support to DBMAIL.
 .
 DBMAIL is a collection of programs that allows both users and email to
 be stored in and retrieved from a relational database.

Package: dbmail-mysql
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, dbmail (= ${binary:Version})
Description: MySQL module for dbmail 


 This package provides a module for adding MySQL database
 support to DBMAIL.
 .
 DBMAIL is a collection of programs that allows both users and email to
 be stored in and retrieved from a relational database.



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