Re: [RFR] templates://grub2/{templates} (Was: Bug#605748: grub-pc: debconf questions should be translated)

[Colin Watson <cjwatson@debian.org>]

On Tue, Dec 07, 2010 at 11:31:27AM -0400, David Prévot wrote:
> Since there will be (at least) one more day for proper review, may I
> propose the attached templates.in file, solving double space issues and
> improper use of second person. Since I'm not a native speaker, I would
> welcome review on this last part.
[...]
> > - However, since you have more than one disk in your system, it is possible
> > - that you were depending on the old device map.  Please check whether you
> > - have any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive
> > + However, since more than one disk is present on the system, it is possible
> > + that the system is depending on the old device map. Please check whether there
> > + are any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive
> >   numbering, and update them if necessary.

This is mostly fine.  I prefer "in the system" to "on the system",
though - to this native speaker, the latter has an "on top of"
connotation that I find a bit jarring.  I've made that change locally.

Thanks,

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Colin Watson                                       [cjwatson@debian.org]