Le 07/12/2010 10:38, Colin Watson a écrit : > On Tue, Dec 07, 2010 at 10:07:54AM -0400, David Prévot wrote: >> If no one objects, I'd like to send a five day call for translation >> update tonight, hoping that further templates update will introduce no >> meaning change. > > I'm travelling right now and it's difficult to review this. Could it > please wait one more day? I'd like us to do a proper job of this to > avoid wasting time if it turns out that further changes are needed. Sure, and thanks for your quick answer. Since there will be (at least) one more day for proper review, may I propose the attached templates.in file, solving double space issues and improper use of second person. Since I'm not a native speaker, I would welcome review on this last part. FWIW, I agree (among others proposals) with Justin's idea to remove “chainload“ jargon of long description of grub-pc.templates.in file. > - However, since you have more than one disk in your system, it is possible > - that you were depending on the old device map. Please check whether you > - have any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive > + However, since more than one disk is present on the system, it is possible > + that the system is depending on the old device map. Please check whether there > + are any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive > numbering, and update them if necessary. > . > - If you do not understand this message, or if you do not have any custom > + If you do not understand this message, or if there are no custom > boot menu entries, you can ignore this message. Regards David
--- grub2-1.98+20100804/debian/templates.in 2010-12-07 09:33:05.000000000 -0400 +++ templates.in 2010-12-07 11:24:24.000000000 -0400 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Type: string _Description: Linux command line: The following Linux command line was extracted from /etc/default/grub or the - `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, + `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, and modify it if necessary. Template: grub2/linux_cmdline_default @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Type: string _Description: kFreeBSD command line: The following kFreeBSD command line was extracted from /etc/default/grub or the - `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, + `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, and modify it if necessary. # still unused @@ -32,14 +32,14 @@ Type: note _Description: /boot/grub/device.map has been regenerated The file /boot/grub/device.map has been rewritten to use stable device - names. In most cases, this should significantly reduce the need to change + names. In most cases, this should significantly reduce the need to change it in future, and boot menu entries generated by GRUB should not be affected. . - However, since you have more than one disk in your system, it is possible - that you were depending on the old device map. Please check whether you - have any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive + However, since more than one disk is present on the system, it is possible + that the system is depending on the old device map. Please check whether there + are any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive numbering, and update them if necessary. . - If you do not understand this message, or if you do not have any custom + If you do not understand this message, or if there are no custom boot menu entries, you can ignore this message.
Template: grub2/linux_cmdline Type: string _Description: Linux command line: The following Linux command line was extracted from /etc/default/grub or the `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, and modify it if necessary. Template: grub2/linux_cmdline_default Type: string Default: quiet _Description: Linux default command line: The following string will be used as Linux parameters for the default menu entry but not for the recovery mode. # still unused Template: grub2/kfreebsd_cmdline Type: string _Description: kFreeBSD command line: The following kFreeBSD command line was extracted from /etc/default/grub or the `kopt' parameter in GRUB Legacy's menu.lst. Please verify that it is correct, and modify it if necessary. # still unused Template: grub2/kfreebsd_cmdline_default Type: string Default: quiet _Description: kFreeBSD default command line: The following string will be used as kFreeBSD parameters for the default menu entry but not for the recovery mode. Template: grub2/device_map_regenerated Type: note _Description: /boot/grub/device.map has been regenerated The file /boot/grub/device.map has been rewritten to use stable device names. In most cases, this should significantly reduce the need to change it in future, and boot menu entries generated by GRUB should not be affected. . However, since more than one disk is present on the system, it is possible that the system is depending on the old device map. Please check whether there are any custom boot menu entries that rely on GRUB's (hdN) drive numbering, and update them if necessary. . If you do not understand this message, or if there are no custom boot menu entries, you can ignore this message.
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