Hi, Le 13/06/2010 05:51, Christian PERRIER a écrit : > This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf > templates for typo3-dummy. Some propositions: - The typo3-dummy package has included the TYPO3 configuration into - the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. In order + TYPO3 has been included into the apache2 configuration and + the rewrite module has been activated. In order Rationale: avoid the useless mention of "typo3-dummy package", and get rid of one of the two "configuration" word (actually, the first one is not really correct, since it really is Apache 2 that is configured at this stage, in order to make TYPO3 work, but TYPO3 configuration files must be elsewhere, as /etc/typo3/). On the other hand, the two phrases "has been [...]ed" doesn't sound really great, maybe it could be better to find other wordings. - contents into one of the new .conf files. + contents into one of the new configuration files Rationale: make it clear that we are talking about configuration files (even default configuration files created by Apache 2 in /etc/apache2/sites-available/ directory doesn't use .conf extension). Cheers David
--- typo3-dummy.templates 2010-06-13 08:32:03.000000000 -0400 +++ typo3-dummy-taffit.templates 2010-06-13 10:58:05.000000000 -0400 @@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ Template: typo3-dummy/apache_restart Type: boolean _Description: Should apache2 be restarted after installation? - The typo3-dummy package has included the TYPO3 configuration into - the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. In order + TYPO3 has been included into the apache2 configuration and + the rewrite module has been activated. In order for these changes to take effect, apache2 must be reloaded. Template: typo3-dummy/old_symlink @@ -31,4 +31,4 @@ /etc/apache2/sites-available/. To prevent failures due to overlapping configuration directives you should remove the symlink typo3-dummy.conf from /etc/apache2/conf.d/ and merge its - contents into one of the new .conf files. + contents into one of the new configuration files.
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