Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the typo3-dummy source package.
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(indeed, there have been very few changes)
Rationale:
--- typo3-dummy.old/debian/typo3-dummy.templates 2010-05-24 14:13:24.689963968 +0200
+++ typo3-dummy/debian/typo3-dummy.templates 2010-05-28 19:51:30.793676881 +0200
@@ -18,16 +18,17 @@
Type: boolean
_Description: Should apache2 be restarted after installation?
The typo3-dummy package has included the TYPO3 configuration into
- the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. To make
- these changes take effect apache2 must be reloaded.
+ the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. In order
+ for these changes to take effect, apache2 must be reloaded.
I feel like my version is better but I need the input from a native
speaker (which I'll get, as usual..:-))
Template: typo3-dummy/old_symlink
Type: note
_Description: Old symlink in /etc/apache2/conf.d/
Older versions (before 4.3.0-3) of typo3-dummy installed the apache2
configuration symlink as /etc/apache2/conf.d/typo3-dummy.conf.
+ .
This has been changed and newer versions place two new symlinks into
/etc/apache2/sites-available/. To prevent failures due to
overlapping configuration directives you should remove the
symlink typo3-dummy.conf from /etc/apache2/conf.d/ and merge its
- contents into one of the new .conf files.
+ content into one of the new .conf files.
Split in two paragraphs. The original was a little bit too condensed
for being readable, imho.
s/contents/content
--- typo3-dummy.old/debian/control 2010-05-24 14:13:24.689963968 +0200
+++ typo3-dummy/debian/control 2010-05-28 19:54:25.557652628 +0200
@@ -10,28 +10,30 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: exim4 | mail-transport-agent, dbconfig-common, debconf, graphicsmagick, lsb-base (>= 3.0-6), php5, php5-cli, php5-gd, php5-mysql, php5-xcache, typo3-src-4.3, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: catdoc, ghostscript, memcached, php5-curl, php5-memcache, ppthtml, typo3-database, unrtf, xlhtml, xpdf-utils
-Description: TYPO3 - the enterprise level open source WebCMS (Site structure)
- TYPO3 is a free Open Source content management system for enterprise purposes
+Description: web content management system
There are other CMS in Debian, so it's definitely not "the"
CMS. Repeating the software name in the description is useless. And,
finally, "enterprise level" are buzzwords...:-)
I guess that "site structure" is here to mean what's explained in the
last paragraph of the long description, but it is IMHO pointless in
the synopsis.
+ TYPO3 is a content management system for enterprise purposes
on the web and in intranets. It offers full flexibility and extendability while
featuring an accomplished set of ready-made interfaces, functions and modules.
drop "free" and "open source". The package is in Debian, so it's by
definition free.
.
The most important key features of TYPO3 are:
- * Simple creation of multi language websites with fallback to a default
- language
- * Handling of multi domain websites within a single page tree
- * Multi user backend editing with complete GUI customisation using an
- advanced ACL system
- * An integrated workflow management system based on an multi step architecture
- with editor and supervisor privileges
- * Unlimited redefinition of the rendering process using the build-in
- TypoScript configuration interface or the plugin API
- * Thousands of plugins are available in the online TYPO3 extension repository
+ * simple creation of multi-language websites with fallback to a default
+ language;
+ * handling of multi-domain websites within a single page tree;
+ * multi-user backend editing with complete GUI customisation using an
+ advanced ACL system;
+ * integrated workflow management system based on an multi-step architecture
+ with editor and supervisor privileges;
+ * unlimited redefinition of the rendering process using the built-in
+ TypoScript configuration interface or the plugin API;
+ * thousands of plugins available in the online TYPO3 extension repository.
Only typography changes: final semi-colons, except for the last item
.
This package provides the basic directory structure to start a new and clean
website based on TYPO3. This includes a default configuration and some scripts
to register the site in Apache.
.
This package is intended for single vhost installations. TYPO3 can be
- configured to work with several vhosts and a single src-dir but this package
- can not handle this for you!
+ configured to work with several vhosts and a single src-dir but such
+ setup has to be done manually after installation.
+
+
Drop exclamation mark to keep the text neutral enough.
--
Template: typo3-dummy/apache_mode
Type: select
__Choices: vhost, directory, none
Default: directory
_Description: Apache integration mode:
Please choose the method that should be used for integrating the
TYPO3 installation with the apache2 web server.
.
vhost: generates shorter URLs with TYPO3 as part of the domain
name, such as http://typo3.example.com/;
directory: fits TYPO3 within the existing site, making it available
at an address like http://www.example.com/cms/;
none: does not configure TYPO3 automatically. The server will
need manual configuration. Choose this option if you are
using a web server other than apache2.
Template: typo3-dummy/apache_restart
Type: boolean
_Description: Should apache2 be restarted after installation?
The typo3-dummy package has included the TYPO3 configuration into
the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. In order
for these changes to take effect, apache2 must be reloaded.
Template: typo3-dummy/old_symlink
Type: note
_Description: Old symlink in /etc/apache2/conf.d/
Older versions (before 4.3.0-3) of typo3-dummy installed the apache2
configuration symlink as /etc/apache2/conf.d/typo3-dummy.conf.
.
This has been changed and newer versions place two new symlinks into
/etc/apache2/sites-available/. To prevent failures due to
overlapping configuration directives you should remove the
symlink typo3-dummy.conf from /etc/apache2/conf.d/ and merge its
content into one of the new .conf files.
--- typo3-dummy.old/debian/typo3-dummy.templates 2010-05-24 14:13:24.689963968 +0200
+++ typo3-dummy/debian/typo3-dummy.templates 2010-05-28 19:51:30.793676881 +0200
@@ -18,16 +18,17 @@
Type: boolean
_Description: Should apache2 be restarted after installation?
The typo3-dummy package has included the TYPO3 configuration into
- the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. To make
- these changes take effect apache2 must be reloaded.
+ the apache2 configuration and activated the rewrite module. In order
+ for these changes to take effect, apache2 must be reloaded.
Template: typo3-dummy/old_symlink
Type: note
_Description: Old symlink in /etc/apache2/conf.d/
Older versions (before 4.3.0-3) of typo3-dummy installed the apache2
configuration symlink as /etc/apache2/conf.d/typo3-dummy.conf.
+ .
This has been changed and newer versions place two new symlinks into
/etc/apache2/sites-available/. To prevent failures due to
overlapping configuration directives you should remove the
symlink typo3-dummy.conf from /etc/apache2/conf.d/ and merge its
- contents into one of the new .conf files.
+ content into one of the new .conf files.
--- typo3-dummy.old/debian/control 2010-05-24 14:13:24.689963968 +0200
+++ typo3-dummy/debian/control 2010-06-02 07:35:56.348642830 +0200
@@ -10,28 +10,30 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: exim4 | mail-transport-agent, dbconfig-common, debconf, graphicsmagick, lsb-base (>= 3.0-6), php5, php5-cli, php5-gd, php5-mysql, php5-xcache, typo3-src-4.3, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: catdoc, ghostscript, memcached, php5-curl, php5-memcache, ppthtml, typo3-database, unrtf, xlhtml, xpdf-utils
-Description: TYPO3 - the enterprise level open source WebCMS (Site structure)
- TYPO3 is a free Open Source content management system for enterprise purposes
+Description: web content management system
+ TYPO3 is a content management system for enterprise purposes
on the web and in intranets. It offers full flexibility and extendability while
featuring an accomplished set of ready-made interfaces, functions and modules.
.
The most important key features of TYPO3 are:
- * Simple creation of multi language websites with fallback to a default
- language
- * Handling of multi domain websites within a single page tree
- * Multi user backend editing with complete GUI customisation using an
- advanced ACL system
- * An integrated workflow management system based on an multi step architecture
- with editor and supervisor privileges
- * Unlimited redefinition of the rendering process using the build-in
- TypoScript configuration interface or the plugin API
- * Thousands of plugins are available in the online TYPO3 extension repository
+ * simple creation of multi-language websites with fallback to a default
+ language;
+ * handling of multi-domain websites within a single page tree;
+ * multi-user backend editing with complete GUI customisation using an
+ advanced ACL system;
+ * integrated workflow management system based on an multi-step architecture
+ with editor and supervisor privileges;
+ * unlimited redefinition of the rendering process using the built-in
+ TypoScript configuration interface or the plugin API;
+ * thousands of plugins available in the online TYPO3 extension repository.
.
This package provides the basic directory structure to start a new and clean
website based on TYPO3. This includes a default configuration and some scripts
to register the site in Apache.
.
- NOTE: This package is intended for single vhost installations. TYPO3 can be
- configured to work with several vhosts and a single src-dir but this package
- can not handle this for you!
+ This package is intended for single vhost installations. TYPO3 can be
+ configured to work with several vhosts and a single src-dir but such
+ setup has to be done manually after installation.
+
+
Source: typo3-dummy
Section: web
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Christian Welzel <gawain@camlann.de>
Homepage: http://www.typo3.com
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 6.0.7), po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.8.4
Package: typo3-dummy
Architecture: all
Depends: exim4 | mail-transport-agent, dbconfig-common, debconf, graphicsmagick, lsb-base (>= 3.0-6), php5, php5-cli, php5-gd, php5-mysql, php5-xcache, typo3-src-4.3, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: catdoc, ghostscript, memcached, php5-curl, php5-memcache, ppthtml, typo3-database, unrtf, xlhtml, xpdf-utils
Description: web content management system
TYPO3 is a content management system for enterprise purposes
on the web and in intranets. It offers full flexibility and extendability while
featuring an accomplished set of ready-made interfaces, functions and modules.
.
The most important key features of TYPO3 are:
* simple creation of multi-language websites with fallback to a default
language;
* handling of multi-domain websites within a single page tree;
* multi-user backend editing with complete GUI customisation using an
advanced ACL system;
* integrated workflow management system based on an multi-step architecture
with editor and supervisor privileges;
* unlimited redefinition of the rendering process using the built-in
TypoScript configuration interface or the plugin API;
* thousands of plugins available in the online TYPO3 extension repository.
.
This package provides the basic directory structure to start a new and clean
website based on TYPO3. This includes a default configuration and some scripts
to register the site in Apache.
.
This package is intended for single vhost installations. TYPO3 can be
configured to work with several vhosts and a single src-dir but such
setup has to be done manually after installation.
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