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Re: [RFR] templates://iog/{iog.templates}



Christian PERRIER wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.
[...]> 
>  Template: iog/migrate
[...]
>   It was detected that a previous package release has data installed in the
> + /var/www/iog/ directory. Current versions of the IOG package now use

The first line's a bit awkward... maybe trim it to
    A previous package release has left data installed in the
 
[...]
>  Package: iog
[...]
> -Description: Network I/O byte grapher
> +Description: network traffic grapher

Can we make this "network I/O grapher" (a hint at the meaning of the
name, as well as a description) and save "network traphic grapher"
for the long description?

> - IOG is a network I/O byte grapher made to graph cumulative KB/MB/GB
> - totals for hours/days and months. It is intended to be simple, fast
> + IOG is a network I/O byte grapher made to graph cumulative network
> + traffic statistics over time. It is intended to be simple, fast
>   (support thousands of hosts) and integrate well with MRTG. Data for

> IOG does not make kilobytes/megabytes....it does network traffic
> statistics. And it does it "over time"

I think you've misread "made to graph [...] totals".  It needs some
tweaking, but I'd suggest:

 IOG is a network traffic grapher designed to record cumulative kB/MB/GB
 statistics per hour/day/month. It is intended to be simple, fast
 (supporting thousands of hosts), and well integrated with MRTG. Data for

-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- ../iog-1.03.pristine/debian/iog.templates	2010-01-25 07:58:01.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/iog.templates	2010-02-03 08:19:51.000000000 +0000
@@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
 Template: iog/migrate
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Migrate old install out of '/var/www/iog/'?
- It was detected that a previous package release has data installed in the
- directory '/var/www/iog/'. The present IOG package suggests the use of
- '/var/lib/iog/' for the same purpose.
+_Description: Migrate old install out of /var/www/iog/?
+ A previous package release has left data installed in the
+ /var/www/iog/ directory. Current versions of the IOG package now use
+ /var/lib/iog/ IOG data files.
  .
- Accepting migration will move all old network data to the new location.
+ If you choose this option, all existing network data will be moved
+ to the new location.
  .
- By changing the directory pointers to '/var/lib/iog' in the configuration
- '/etc/iog.cfg', and writing an alias declaration for the web server,
- IOG will then serve uninterrupted statistics also after the upgrade.
+ Consequently, directory settings in the IOG configuration file
+ (/etc/iog.cfg) will be changed to /var/lib/iog and a web server
+ alias declaration will be added so that old network statistics
+ are still published.
--- ../iog-1.03.pristine/debian/control	2010-01-25 07:58:01.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/control	2010-02-03 08:30:42.000000000 +0000
@@ -5,18 +5,17 @@
 Build-Depends: debhelper (>> 3.0.0)
 Build-Depends-Indep: po-debconf
 Standards-Version: 3.5.2
+Homepage: http://www.dynw.com/iog/
 
 Package: iog
 Architecture: all
 Depends: libsnmp-session-perl, ucf, debconf, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: snmpd
-Description: Network I/O byte grapher
- IOG is a network I/O byte grapher made to graph cumulative KB/MB/GB
- totals for hours/days and months. It is intended to be simple, fast
- (support thousands of hosts) and integrate well with MRTG. Data for
+Description: network I/O grapher
+ IOG is a network traffic grapher designed to record cumulative kB/MB/GB
+ statistics per hour/day/month. It is intended to be simple, fast
+ (supporting thousands of hosts), and well integrated with MRTG. Data for
  each host is updated hourly and HTML graphs are created. It uses a
  data consolidation algorithm which allows for a small, non-growing
- database file for each host. No external graphing libs or
+ database file for each host. No external graphing libraries or
  executables are required.
- .
- Website: http://www.dynw.com/iog/
Template: iog/migrate
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Migrate old install out of /var/www/iog/?
 A previous package release has left data installed in the
 /var/www/iog/ directory. Current versions of the IOG package now use
 /var/lib/iog/ IOG data files.
 .
 If you choose this option, all existing network data will be moved
 to the new location.
 .
 Consequently, directory settings in the IOG configuration file
 (/etc/iog.cfg) will be changed to /var/lib/iog and a web server
 alias declaration will be added so that old network statistics
 are still published.
Source: iog
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Mark Purcell <msp@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>> 3.0.0)
Build-Depends-Indep: po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.5.2
Homepage: http://www.dynw.com/iog/

Package: iog
Architecture: all
Depends: libsnmp-session-perl, ucf, debconf, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: snmpd
Description: network I/O grapher
 IOG is a network traffic grapher designed to record cumulative kB/MB/GB
 statistics per hour/day/month. It is intended to be simple, fast
 (supporting thousands of hosts), and well integrated with MRTG. Data for
 each host is updated hourly and HTML graphs are created. It uses a
 data consolidation algorithm which allows for a small, non-growing
 database file for each host. No external graphing libraries or
 executables are required.

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