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Re: debian/control description text review for udav package



Hi Justin

On Sun, May 03, 2009 at 09:00:00PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> >>   Description: data visualization application based on MathGL
> >>
> >> Or would it be better to call it an "environment"?
> >
> > I think "data visualization application" would be ok., but the "data
> > vizualisation" is done based on MathGL. If I say "data visualization
> > application based on MathGL", would it state correctly, that the
> > visualization is done based on the MathGL library?
> 
> You could say:
>    Description: application for data visualization based on MathGL
> or just change it to:
>    Description: data visualization application using MathGL

Ok, then I will go for the first one.

> So they're _three_ different things!?  Or is it:
> 
>      [...], and supports a wide range of graphical effects with a simple
>      scripting language, MGL. Features include:

This one will fit that the best!

> >> So that's:
> >> 
> >>  * Simple and fast plotting of data and formulas;
> >>  * One-click interface - just open the datafile in UDAV;
> >>  * Scripts and graphical output both shown at the same time;
> >>  * Rotate, pan, and zoom controls (via buttons or mouse);
> >>  * Toggleable lighting and transparency;
> >>  * GIF Animation;
>           ^
> Why did I capitalise "Animation"?

I don't know ;-)

Bests and a nice evening!
Salvatore

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