Please find, for review, the debconf templates of sinfo.
This review will last from Wednesday, October 14, 2009 to Saturday, October 24, 2009.
Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
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Rationale:
--- ../sinfo.old/debian/sinfo.templates 2009-10-10 21:47:53.000000000 +0300
+++ debian/sinfo.templates 2009-10-14 21:52:15.000000000 +0300
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
Template: sinfo/cgi
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Enable the CGI interface to sinfo?
- Sinfo includes a CGI-script which provides a web-interface
- to sinfo. The CGI-script may publish information about
- your computer you don't want to make available to the public.
+_Description: Enable the sinfo CGI interface?
+ The sinfo package includes a CGI script web interface for sinfo. It is
+ disabled by default as it might publish information the computer not
+ intended to be public.
Simplify sentences and give the explanation as a rationale for the default
value.
--- ../sinfo.old/debian/control 2009-10-10 21:47:53.000000000 +0300
+++ debian/control 2009-10-14 21:05:07.000000000 +0300
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
Architecture: any
Depends: debconf, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Conflicts: slurm-llnl
-Description: Monitoring tool for computer clusters using broadcasts
+Description: tool for monitoring computer clusters using broadcasts
Clarify that it is this tool that uses the broadcasts.
Sinfo is a monitoring tool that uses network broadcasts to distribute
- information about the status of a cluster node on your local network. It
+ information about the status of cluster nodes on your local network. It
broadcasts CPU, memory usage, network load, and information about the top
5 processes of each computer. Sinfo consists of a daemon running on each
- node to distribute the information and an ncurses frontend to monitor the
+ node distributing the information and an ncurses frontend to monitor the
nodes.
Homepage: http://www.ant.uni-bremen.de/whomes/rinas/sinfo/
Just some tweaking of the language. Hopefully to more correct. :-)
Template: sinfo/cgi Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable the sinfo CGI interface? The sinfo package includes a CGI script web interface for sinfo. It is disabled by default as it might publish information the computer not intended to be public.
--- ../sinfo.old/debian/sinfo.templates 2009-10-10 21:47:53.000000000 +0300
+++ debian/sinfo.templates 2009-10-14 21:52:15.000000000 +0300
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
Template: sinfo/cgi
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Enable the CGI interface to sinfo?
- Sinfo includes a CGI-script which provides a web-interface
- to sinfo. The CGI-script may publish information about
- your computer you don't want to make available to the public.
+_Description: Enable the sinfo CGI interface?
+ The sinfo package includes a CGI script web interface for sinfo. It is
+ disabled by default as it might publish information the computer not
+ intended to be public.
--- ../sinfo.old/debian/control 2009-10-10 21:47:53.000000000 +0300
+++ debian/control 2009-10-14 21:05:07.000000000 +0300
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
Architecture: any
Depends: debconf, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Conflicts: slurm-llnl
-Description: Monitoring tool for computer clusters using broadcasts
+Description: tool for monitoring computer clusters using broadcasts
Sinfo is a monitoring tool that uses network broadcasts to distribute
- information about the status of a cluster node on your local network. It
+ information about the status of cluster nodes on your local network. It
broadcasts CPU, memory usage, network load, and information about the top
5 processes of each computer. Sinfo consists of a daemon running on each
- node to distribute the information and an ncurses frontend to monitor the
+ node distributing the information and an ncurses frontend to monitor the
nodes.
Homepage: http://www.ant.uni-bremen.de/whomes/rinas/sinfo/
Source: sinfo
Section: net
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Juergen Rinas <jrinas@gmx.de>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 7.0.0), libncurses5-dev, libboost-dev, libboost-signals-dev, libboost-regex-dev, libasio-dev, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.8.0.0
Package: sinfo
Architecture: any
Depends: debconf, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Conflicts: slurm-llnl
Description: tool for monitoring computer clusters using broadcasts
Sinfo is a monitoring tool that uses network broadcasts to distribute
information about the status of cluster nodes on your local network. It
broadcasts CPU, memory usage, network load, and information about the top
5 processes of each computer. Sinfo consists of a daemon running on each
node distributing the information and an ncurses frontend to monitor the
nodes.
Homepage: http://www.ant.uni-bremen.de/whomes/rinas/sinfo/
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