Re: [RFR] templates://openoffice.org/{templates}
Christian Perrier wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.
> OpenOffice.org is running right now. A running OpenOffice.org makes
> extension (de-)registration not possible and it causes problems with
> (de-)registering components.
"Makes it not possible" is clunky. Why not just "prevents"? Or even:
OpenOffice.org is running right now. This can cause problems with
(de-)registration of components and extensions.
> - Please close OpenOffice.org (including an eventually running Quickstarter).
> + You should close all running instances of OpenOffice.org before
> + proceeding with the package upgrade (including an eventually running
> + Quickstarter).
Is this some sort of false-friend use of "eventually"? I would have
expected something like:
You should close all running instances of OpenOffice.org (including
any currently running Quickstarter) before proceeding with the package
upgrade.
I could review the control file for this one, too, if I had a spare
weekend (so maybe I will).
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- openoffice.org-3.1.1.pristine/debian/templates 2009-10-08 08:23:13.000000000 +0100
+++ openoffice.org-3.1.1/debian/templates 2009-10-09 12:23:12.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
Template: openoffice.org/running
Type: error
-_Description: OpenOffice.org running!
- OpenOffice.org is running right now. A running OpenOffice.org makes
- extension (de-)registration not possible and it causes problems with
- (de-)registering components.
+_Description: OpenOffice.org running
+ OpenOffice.org is running right now. This can cause problems with
+ (de-)registration of components and extensions.
.
- Please close OpenOffice.org (including an eventually running Quickstarter).
+ You should close all running instances of OpenOffice.org (including
+ any currently running Quickstarter) before proceeding with the package
+ upgrade.
Template: openoffice.org/running
Type: error
_Description: OpenOffice.org running
OpenOffice.org is running right now. This can cause problems with
(de-)registration of components and extensions.
.
You should close all running instances of OpenOffice.org (including
any currently running Quickstarter) before proceeding with the package
upgrade.
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