Quoting Juliet Kemp (firstname.lastname@example.org): > "mentions" should be "mentioned" to match the tense of "published" and > "thanked". > > Debians System Adminstrators should be Debian Systems Administrators. .../... and other valuable suggestions. Juliet, may I ask you where you read Alex call for reviews? I have never seen contributions from you in debian-l10n-english so I assume you read it in debian-publicity.... (please forgive me if I'm wrong and forgive me even more if you already *did* contributions to -l10n-english and I just have a brain failure). Given that your suggestions were very clever, may I suggest you that debian-l10n-english would very warmly welcome contributions you could make. In any case, thanks a lot for this review... /bubulle, wearing his "recruiting native speakers hat" in a desperate attempt to stop being the Frenchman teaching (fr)English to others with the help of too few native speakers...
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