Re: Bug#501121: jd: package description inadequate
Hideki Yamane <henrich@debian.or.jp> writes:
> So, reviewers, could you check below description, please?
>
> > ***** BEGINNING *****
> > JD is a simple and easy-to-use browser for 2ch-style bulletin board
> > systems (or Internet forums), which ensures you comfortable 2ch browsing
> > experience with its various functionalities such as logging in,
> > message viewing/posting, image viewing, mouse gestures, ignore lists,
> > "play-by-play" mode, and so on, while significantly reducing server workloads
> > by bypassing CGI programs and directly retrieving thread data files
> > to your local hard drives.
The sentence is far too long; package descriptions are usually better
with separate, simpler sentences. I also find some of the terms a
little verbose and unclear. Suggested improvement:
Description: simple browser for “2ch-style” web forum sites
JD is a simple browser allowing easy use of “2ch-style” web
forum sites. Its features include:
.
* log in
* message view/post
* image view
* mouse gestures
* ignore lists
* “play-by-play” mode
.
“2ch-style” web forum sites have their origins in 2channel,
which is a very popular Internet forum in Japan. Such sites are
often available only in the Japanese language. The sites
supported by JD include:
.
* 2channel <http://www.2ch.net>
* Shitaraba <http://rentalbbs.livedoor.com/jbbs/>
* Machi-BBS <http://www.machi.to/>
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