Re: Bug#501121: jd: package description inadequate
Hideki Yamane <firstname.lastname@example.org> wrote:
> So, reviewers, could you check below description, please?
> "login:Penguin" <email@example.com> wrote:
> > ***** BEGINNING *****
> > JD is a simple and easy-to-use browser for 2ch-style bulletin board
> > systems (or Internet forums), which ensures you comfortable 2ch browsing
s/ensures you/offers a
> > experience with its various functionalities such as logging in,
s/its various functionalities/features
s/logging in/automated login
# (not sure about the second one - just logging in didn't seem much of
# a function)
> > message viewing/posting, image viewing, mouse gestures, ignore lists,
> > "play-by-play" mode, and so on, while significantly reducing server workloads
> > by bypassing CGI programs and directly retrieving thread data files
> > to your local hard drives.
> > 2ch-style BBSes have their origins in 2channel, which is the most popular
> > Internet forum in Japan, and are often available only in the Japanese language.
> > Some of these BBSes are listed below.
> > - 2channel (http://www.2ch.net)
> > - Shitaraba (http://rentalbbs.livedoor.com/jbbs/)
> > - Machi-BBS (http://www.machi.to/)
> > ***** END *****
Other than that, no errors leaped out at me.
Hope that helps,
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