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Re: Bug#501121: jd: package description inadequate

Hideki Yamane <henrich@debian.or.jp> wrote:
>  So, reviewers, could you check below description, please?
> "login:Penguin" <loginpenguin@gmail.com> wrote:
> > ***** BEGINNING *****
> > JD is a simple and easy-to-use browser for 2ch-style bulletin board 
> > systems (or Internet forums), which ensures you comfortable 2ch browsing 

s/ensures you/offers a

> > experience with its various functionalities such as logging in, 

s/its various functionalities/features
s/logging in/automated login
# (not sure about the second one - just logging in didn't seem much of
#  a function)

> > message viewing/posting, image viewing, mouse gestures, ignore lists, 
> > "play-by-play" mode, and so on, while significantly reducing server workloads 
> > by bypassing CGI programs and directly retrieving thread data files 
> > to your local hard drives.
> > 
> > 2ch-style BBSes have their origins in 2channel, which is the most popular 
> > Internet forum in Japan, and are often available only in the Japanese language. 
> > Some of these BBSes are listed below.
> >  - 2channel (http://www.2ch.net)
> >  - Shitaraba (http://rentalbbs.livedoor.com/jbbs/)
> >  - Machi-BBS (http://www.machi.to/)
> > ***** END *****

Other than that, no errors leaped out at me.

Hope that helps,
MJ Ray (slef)
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