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Re: Questions regarding wording in DPN #9, #10 and #11


Helge Kreutzmann schrieb:
>>> 2) In the meantime and updated version of the desktop-base package has
>>>    been uploaded including a new default theme as well as a second
>>>    one.
>>>    I'd change "and updated" to "an updated".
>> I can't tell from reading this what the second one is a second one
>> of.  A second theme?  A second version?  Neither of those options
>> quite seems to make sense...
> Since 1) is exactly the sentence before this one looking at the
> context I think "theme" is right, but Tolimar should be able to
> comment on this better than me.

The package contains second theme.

Best regards,

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