Re: Questions regarding wording in DPN #9, #10 and #11
Hi!
Helge Kreutzmann schrieb:
>>> 2) In the meantime and updated version of the desktop-base package has
>>> been uploaded including a new default theme as well as a second
>>> one.
>>> I'd change "and updated" to "an updated".
>> I can't tell from reading this what the second one is a second one
>> of. A second theme? A second version? Neither of those options
>> quite seems to make sense...
> Since 1) is exactly the sentence before this one looking at the
> context I think "theme" is right, but Tolimar should be able to
> comment on this better than me.
The package contains second theme.
Best regards,
Alexander
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