Re: urgent template feedback highly appreciated
Holger Levsen wrote:
> http://paste.debian.net/7183/ contains the freshly rewritten templates for
> debian-edu-install, based on a lot of very helpful feedback from the mighty
> Christian Perrier.
>
> Can you spot any obvious bad english left in there?
I'll include it here for the sake of exposing it to extra eyes.
# Template: debian-edu-install/profile
# Type: multiselect
# __Choices: Main-Server, Workstation, Thin-Client-Server, Standalone
# _Description: Profile(s) to apply to this machine:
# Profiles determine how the machine can be used out-of-the-box:
# .
# - Main-Server: reserved for the Debian Edu server. It does not
# include any GUI (Graphical User Interface). There should only
# be one such server on a Debian Edu network.
# - Workstation: for normal machines on the network. Users are authenticated
# by the 'Main-Server' which also hosts their data.
# - Thin-Client-Server:
# includes 'Workstation' and requires two network cards.
# - Standalone: for machines meant to be used outside the Debian Edu network.
# It includes a GUI and conflicts with other profiles.
#
# Template: debian-edu-install/profile-expert
# Type: multiselect
# __Choices: Main-Server, Workstation, Thin-Client-Server, Standalone, Minimal, Sugar
# _Description: Profile(s) to apply to this machine:
# Profiles determine how the machine can be used out-of-the-box:
# .
# - Main-Server: reserved for the Debian Edu server. It does not
# include any GUI (Graphical User Interface). There should only
# be one such server on a Debian Edu network.
# - Workstation: for normal machines on the network. Users are authenticated
# by the 'Main-Server' which also hosts their data.
# - Thin-Client-Server:
# includes 'Workstation' and requires two network cards.
# - Standalone : for machines meant to be used outside the Debian Edu network.
# It includes a GUI and conflicts with other profiles.
# - Sugar : variant of 'Standalone' that includes the Sugar desktop
# environment which promotes sharing and collaborative
# learning for children.
# - Minimal : fully integrated into the Debian Edu Network but contains
# only a basic system without any GUI.
My only comment is that perhaps that last "Debian Edu Network"
should be a "network" (as elsewhere); hardly a showstopper.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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