Re: Request for English debconf template review
Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk> wrote: [...]
> I don't see any typos or serious stuff like that.
Me neither.
> During the upgrade, one or more slurpd "replica" options were found
> in the slapd configuration file. Beginning with OpenLDAP 2.4, slurpd
> is obsolete, so the replicas will need to be migrated to using
> syncrepl instead.
I suggest avoiding the "Beginning with ..." construct and writing
"slurpd became obsolete in OpenLDAP 2.4" instead because I think it's
clearer and more direct.
But both versions posted so far are pretty good.
Hope that helps,
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