Quoting MJ Ray (mjr@phonecoop.coop): > > s/username/user name > > I disagree with that change. New compound words tend to close up over > time and arguably "username" is clearer here than "user name". > Compare with "userid" in the Wired style guide, if you have it. Hmmm, well, we discourage "filesystem", but anyway, you're a best authority than me..:-) > > [...] > > + Please specify the backup file name. You should check the available > > + disk space. If the backup file already exists, it will be overwritten. > > Add "in that location" after "You should check the available disk > space" perhaps? I think it may be too vague otherwise. Yep, adopted > > [...] > > - such as exhausted disk space, and then try to configure this package again. > > + and try to configure this package again. > > > > Just leave the local admin guesses about possible failure reasons as > > we known there can be many of these. > > However, if exhausted disk space is the most common cause, it may be > helpful to suggest it. in /etc? I'm not really convinced that this is a more common failure than anything else.... > > > Please eliminate all possible reasons that might lead to this failure, > > - and then try to configure this package again. > > + and try to configure this package again. > > > > "then" seems useless to me here > > It conveys more of a sense of "this first, then that" - not essential, > but not useless. Well, I reacted to the accumulation: "and then". Therefore, I propose: Please eliminate....., then try to configure....
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