Re: [RFR] templates://cyrus-sasl2/{sasl2-bin.templates}
This is fairly discursive, so not a diff.
Christian Perrier <bubulle@debian.org> wrote:
> s/username/user name
I disagree with that change. New compound words tend to close up over
time and arguably "username" is clearer here than "user name".
Compare with "userid" in the Wired style guide, if you have it.
[...]
> + Please specify the backup file name. You should check the available
> + disk space. If the backup file already exists, it will be overwritten.
Add "in that location" after "You should check the available disk
space" perhaps? I think it may be too vague otherwise.
[...]
> - such as exhausted disk space, and then try to configure this package again.
> + and try to configure this package again.
>
> Just leave the local admin guesses about possible failure reasons as
> we known there can be many of these.
However, if exhausted disk space is the most common cause, it may be
helpful to suggest it.
> Please eliminate all possible reasons that might lead to this failure,
> - and then try to configure this package again.
> + and try to configure this package again.
>
> "then" seems useless to me here
It conveys more of a sense of "this first, then that" - not essential,
but not useless.
Hope that helps,
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