Re: [RFR] templates://analog/{templates}

[Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk>]

Christian Perrier wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

In the template:
> + Enabling it may have security implications and expose
> + informations, such as web site logs, that shouldn't be public.

Singular (non-countable) "information".

In the package description:
> + Description: web server log files analyzer         

Log file analyzer (or maybe log analyzer).

[...]
> +  - Flexible: the default output is well suited for many needs
> +    but etra options help producing 32 different report styles;

Typo: "extra".  But all "options" are "extra" relative to the
defaults!  Reverting slightly:

       but there are many options and 32 alternative report styles;
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)

--- ../analog.old/debian/templates	2007-10-21 13:12:47.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/templates	2007-10-25 17:21:14.000000000 +0100
@@ -2,6 +2,9 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable the anlgform web interface to analog?
- Analog includes a cgi script called anlgform that provides a web interface
- to analog. It has a history of security problems, and may expose
- information (web site logs) that you don't want to make public.
+ Analog includes a CGI script called anlgform that provides a web interface
+ to the software.
+ .
+ Enabling it may have security implications and expose
+ information, such as web site logs, that shouldn't be public.
+
--- ../analog.old/debian/control	2007-10-21 13:12:47.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control	2007-10-25 17:20:46.000000000 +0100
@@ -10,18 +10,16 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, perl
 Suggests: apache | httpd, rmagic
-Description: analyzes logfiles from web servers
- Analog is a fast logfile processor that generates usage statistic
- reports for your web server.
+Description: web server log file analyzer
+ Analog is a fast log file processor that generates usage statistic
+ reports for web servers.
  .
  Features:
-   * It's fast. Very fast. It can process millions of lines per minute.
-   * It's very scalable.
-   * It's very flexible. The default output will be satisfactory for
-     most people, but there are hundreds of options producing 32
-     different reports for those who want to do things differently.
-   * It can output in many different languages, and 4 output formats.
-   * It produces attractive output that complies with the HTML spec
-     (and so can be read on any browser).
-   * It can read logfiles in almost any format.
-   * It can be run at the command line or from a web form interface.
+  - Fast: can process millions of lines per minute;
+  - Scalable;
+  - Flexible: the default output is well suited for many needs
+    but there are many options and 32 alternative report styles;
+  - Internationalized output;
+  - HTML output (compliant with standards);
+  - Handles many log file formats;
+  - Uses a command-line interface or a web interface.

Template: analog/anlgform
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Enable the anlgform web interface to analog?
 Analog includes a CGI script called anlgform that provides a web interface
 to the software.
 .
 Enabling it may have security implications and expose
 information, such as web site logs, that shouldn't be public.

Source: analog
Section: web
Priority: optional
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), libpcre3-dev, libz-dev, libjpeg-dev, libpng12-dev, libgd2-noxpm-dev (>= 2.0.1-18), libbz2-dev, dpkg-dev (>= 1.9.0)
Maintainer: Joey Hess <joeyh@debian.org>
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
XS-Vcs-Svn: svn://svn.kitenet.net/joey/trunk/src/packages/analog

Package: analog
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, perl
Suggests: apache | httpd, rmagic
Description: web server log file analyzer
 Analog is a fast log file processor that generates usage statistic
 reports for web servers.
 .
 Features:
  - Fast: can process millions of lines per minute;
  - Scalable;
  - Flexible: the default output is well suited for many needs
    but there are many options and 32 alternative report styles;
  - Internationalized output;
  - HTML output (compliant with standards);
  - Handles many log file formats;
  - Uses a command-line interface or a web interface.