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Re: [RFR] templates://zekr-quran-translations-en/{templates}



Justin and Christian,

Thank you for your reviewing and your comments.
The zekr developer is in a trip. As soon as he returns, we will respond back to you regarding your comments.

Sincerely,
Mohammad

On 10/15/07, Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk > wrote:
Christian Perrier wrote:
> +_Description: No authenticity warranty
> + Translations provided in this package are a colelction of publicly
> + available translations on the web.

The providing isn't on the web:
   _Description: No warranty of authenticity
    This package provides a collection of translations which are
    publicly available on the web.

> + According to Islamic theology, perfectly translating the
> + Qur'an is impossible. Most of the time, English translations are
> + considered to be 'intepretations', side by side with the Arabic text.
> + attempting to provide its best _expression_.

Make that:
    attempting to provide the best _expression_ of its meaning.

> +_Description: Commercial redistribution prohibited
> + The contents of this package should not be resistributed for
> + commercial purposes. It is only provided to help readers to learn
> + more about Islam.

s/resistributed/redistributed/

> + For more information, please read the
> + /usr/share/doc/zekr-quran-translations-en/README.txt.gz file.

Not gzipped, according to
http://packages.debian.org/sid/zekr-quran-translations-en/all/filelist

Then in the control file:
> +Description: Zekr Quran English translations

The templates file has "Qur'an" and the control file has "Quran".
I'd favour standardising on "Qur'an" wherever it isn't part of the
packagename, so that repository searches catch either.  Of course,
that still leaves "Koran", "Qur'ān", "Ḳur'ân"...

> + This package provides translations can be used with Zekr, Quranic software.

Missing words, but rephrase:
    This package provides translations for use with the free Qur'anic study
    tool Zekr.
--
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)



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