On Wed, Jul 04, 2007 at 07:10:55AM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote......
> Template: zope-common/remove-instance-without-data
> Type: select
> _Choices: abort, remove and continue
> Default: abort
> +_Description: Action on old/incomplete zope instance '${instance}':
> + An old/incomplete ${instance} instance was found in
> + /var/lib/zope${zver}/instance/${instance}, with no Data.fs file Data.fs.
Is this an accidental repeat of the word Data.fs?
> + This installation is either incomplete or incompletely removed.
> + .
> + Choosing 'abort' will allow you to inspect the state of the
> + instance.
> + .
> + Choosing 'remove and continue' will remove /var/lib/zope${zver}/instance/${instance}
> + and reinstall ${instance}. Existing logfiles in
> + /etc/zope${zver}/${instance} will be preserved.
>
> I'm not completely sure about the change in tense, here. Maybe
> Frenglish influence.
Seems OK to me.
> Template: zope-common/keep-data-on-purge
> Type: boolean
> Default: true
> _Description: Keep data for ${instance} on package purge?
> - Purging the data files of a zope instance on package purge
> - results in loss of all data of the zope instance. The data
> - files for this instance are stored in
> + Purging the data files of a Zope instance on package purge
> + results in loss of all data of that instance. These data
> + files are stored in
How about:
when purging the package, the data files for a Zope instance will
also be purged, resulting in the loss of all data for that instance.
These data files are stored in
> /var/lib/zope${zver}/instance/${instance}.
>
> s/zope/Zope
>
> Avoid repetition
>
>
> Template: zope-common/admin-user
> Type: string
> Default: admin
> -_Description: Admin user for zope instance '${instance}':
> - Please enter an admin user for the zope instance '${instance}'.
> - A valid user name starts with a letter, followed by letters and digits.
> - .
> - NOTE: Once the instance has been created, the parameter entered
> - here isn't relevant anymore. To change the admin user (and password)
> - later on, call:
> +_Description: Administrative user for '${instance}' Zope instance:
> + Please enter the login name of the administrative user for the '${instance}' Zope instance .
> + A valid login name starts with a letter, followed by letters and digits.
> + .
> + This will only be used for the instance creation. To later change the
> + administrative user login name and password, please use the following
> + command:
How about:
This will only be used for instance creation. Please use the
following command to change the administrative user login name and
password at a later time:
> .
> /var/lib/zope${zver}/instance/${instance}/bin/zopectl adduser <user> <password>
>
> I am unsure about "starts with a letter"...
Hmm. It seems OK but how about:
A valid login name starts with an alpha character, followed by
additional alpha characters and digits.
> Template: zope-common/admin-password
> Type: password
> -_Description: Password for the admin user:
> - Please enter a password for the admin user. The password must not be empty.
> - The password is deleted from the configuration database, once the
> - instance is sucessfully created and cannot be recoverd.
> - .
> - NOTE: Once the instance has been created, the parameter entered
> - here isn't relevant anymore. To change the admin user (and password)
> - later on, call:
> +_Description: Password for the administrative user:
> + Please enter a password for the administrative user. The password
> + must not be empty. The password is deleted from the configuration
> + database, once the instance is sucessfully created and cannot be
> + recoverd.
No need for the comma. Spelling correction (successfully and
recovered).
Please enter a password for the administrative user. The password
must not be empty. The password is deleted from the configuration
database once the instance is successfully created and cannot be
recovered.
> + .
> + This will only be used for the instance creation. To later change the
> + administrative user login name and password, please use the following
> + command:
This will only be used for the instance creation. Please use the
following command to change the administrative user login name and
password at a later time:
> .
> /var/lib/zope${zver}/instance/${instance}/bin/zopectl adduser <user> <password>
--
Kevin Coyner GnuPG key: 1024D/8CE11941
Attachment:
signature.asc
Description: Digital signature