On Tue, Jul 03, 2007 at 06:33:25PM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote...... My comments, which are purely stylistic, are appended below. Use them if it sounds better to you. Kevin > --- ../mapserver.old/debian/control 2007-06-26 10:59:26.725090484 +0200 > +++ debian/control 2007-07-03 08:51:05.438913868 +0200 > -Description: module for php5-cgi to use mapserver > - PHP MapScript allows you to use the MapServer functionalities with PHP web > +Description: php5-cgi module for MapServer > + PHP MapScript allows using the MapServer functionalities with the PHP web > scripting language. How about: PHP MapScript makes it possible to use MapServer functionalities with the PHP web scripting language. > -Description: perl mapserver library > - perl mapscript allows you to use the MapServer functionalities > - with perl scripting language. > +Description: Perl library for MapServer > + The Perl mapscript library allows using the MapServer functionalities > + with the Perl scripting language. Similarly, how about: The Perl mapscript library makes it possible to use MapServer functionalities with the Perl scripting language. > -Description: python mapserver lib > - Python mapscript allows you to use the MapServer functionalities > +Description: Python library for MapServer > + The Python mapscript allows using the MapServer functionalities > with the Python scripting language. And: The Python mapscript library makes it possible to use MapServer functionalities with the Python scripting language. > -Description: documentation for mapserver > - Some short documentation and examples for MapServer. > +Description: documentation for MapServer > + This package provides some short documentation for MapServer. This package provides some brief documentation for MapServer. -- Kevin Coyner GnuPG key: 1024D/8CE11941
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