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Re: [RFR] templates://davfs2/{templates}



Attached is a patch to the original versions of templates and
control.

Below please find changes to the RFR version with comments.

Regards, Kevin

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 Template: davfs2/suid_file
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
- _Description: Should unprovileged users be allowed to mount WebDAV resources?

+ _Description: Should unprivileged users be allowed to mount WebDAV resources?

<kc> Simple spelling mistake.

 .
 Choosing this option is discouraged for security reasons. If you
- choose it, more details will be required.

+ choose it, additional input will be required.

<kc> Personal preference.

 .
- Otherwise, only root will be allowed to mount WebDAV resources. This can
- later be changed by running 'dpkg-reconfigure davfs2'.

+ If you do not choose this option, only root will be allowed to mount WebDAV
+ resources. This can later be changed by running 'dpkg-reconfigure davfs2'.

<kc> Again, personal preference. I just like to make things very,
<kc> very clear to the user, espeically when it comes to debconf
<kc> choices.


 Template: davfs2/user_name
 Type: string
 Default: davfs2
 _Description: User running the mount.davfs daemon:
- Once the davfs resource has been mounted, the daemon may drop the

+ Once the davfs resource has been mounted, the daemon will drop the

<kc> 'may' sounds like the daemon has free will and may or may not drop
<kc> root privileges. 'will' is more definitive.


 Template: davfs2/group_name
 Type: string
 Default: davfs2
- _Description: Group for the users allowed to mount WebDAV resources:

+ _Description: Group for the users that will be allowed to mount
+ WebDAV resources:


 Template: davfs2/new_user
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
- _Description: Do you want to create the user?

+ _Description: Do you want to create a new user?

<kc> I presume this is a new user, so why not state such. Otherwise
<kc> 'the user' sounds specific to a predetermined user.
<kc> Same for 'group' below.


 Template: davfs2/new_group
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
- _Description: Do you want to create the group?

+ _Description: Do you want to create a new group?


 Template: davfs2/non_root_users_confimed
 Type: note
 #flag:translate!:3,5
 _Description: Unprivileged users allowed to mount WebDAV resources
  The "${group_name}" group and the "${user_name}" user will be used by
  davfs2. All users who should be granted the right to mount WebDAV
-  resources should be added to that group:

+ resources should be added to the group "${group_name}" using the
+ following command:

<kc> Just additional clarification.


  usermod -a -G ${group_name} <username>
  .
  The following should also be added to /etc/fstab:
  .
  https://webdav.site.com/path  /mnt  davfs  rw,users,noauto  0  0
  .
-  More options can optionaly be used. Please read the mount.davfs man page

+ Additional options are available. Please read the mount.davfs man page


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 Source: davfs2
 Section: utils
 Priority: extra
 Maintainer: Luciano Bello <luciano@linux.org.ar>
 Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 4.0.0), po-debconf, libssl-dev, libxml2-dev, libneon26-dev
 Uploaders: Marcela Tiznado <mlt@debian.org>
 Standards-Version: 3.7.2

 Package: davfs2
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, adduser
 Description: mount WebDAV resources as regular file systems
-  DAVFS2 is a Linux file system driver that allows mouting a WebDAV
-  resource as a regular file system.

+  davfs2 is a Linux file system driver that allows mounting a
+  WebDAV resource as a regular file system.

<kc> Should it be davfs2 or DAVFS2? I prefer davfs2.

 .
- It allows files in a remote Web resource to be edited using standard
- applications that interact with the file system (e.g.  text
- editors). It uses coda for file system operations and the neon
- library for WebDAV access. It supports SSL and proxy servers. The
- code is based on uservfs (uservfs.sf.net).

+ davfs2 allows files in a remote Web resource to be edited using standard
+ applications that interact with the file system (e.g.  text editors). It uses
+ coda for file system operations and the neon library for WebDAV access.
+ davfs2 also supports SSL and proxy servers. The code is based on uservfs
+ (uservfs.sf.net).

<kc> Previously this paragraph had three sentences all beginning
<kc> with "It".


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